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Because of the special nature of children’s literature, Red-Line Editing Services has editors who understand your special needs. We offer the full array of critiquing and editing services that we do for larger manuscripts, but gear those services toward a younger audience. They will not only review your work for grammar and punctuation, but also style, and suitability to the age of your intended market.

Children's Book Critiques

The editor will give you feedback on the following:

1.    The Current Title

        How catchy is it?

        How well does it convey the information in the manuscript?

        Editor’s suggestions (if any) to improve.

2.    The Current Query Letter

        How catchy is it?

        Does it intrigue?

        Does it conform to industry standards?

        Does it have the required elements?

        Editor’s suggestions (if any) to improve.


3.    The Current Length of the Work

        Is it appropriate for the target market?

        Editor’s additional comments regarding length of this manuscript.


4.    What is the power of the opening 3-5 sentences?

        Does it have the required elements?

        Editor’s suggestions (if any) to improve.

 

5.    Rhyme and Meter (If applicable)

        Does the piece flow properly?

        Are the rhyming schemes consistent?

        Editor’s suggestions (if any) to improve.


6.    Dialogue (if any) – Describe and comment.

        Voice

        Action/Dialogue exchange balance

        Dialogue tagging

        Editor’s suggestions (if any) to improve.


7.    Are the cast of characters endearing?

        Editor’s suggestions (if any) to improve.


8.     Is the material within the book age appropriate for the target market?

9.     Does the book meet the set objectives?

10.   Mechanics:


         Grammar

         Spelling

         Punctuation

         Formatting

         Is there a need for illustrations?

         If the submission has illustrations available for the reviewer to evaluate, how well do they relate to the story?


11.   Other / Conclusion
 

Children’s Book Critiques (ages 12 and younger)

 

$50

 

Children's Book Editing

Because the variety of children's books as well as the suitability issues for the target markets, we are unable to quote here a specific fee to have your children's book edited. We ask that you email us your manuscript so that our manager of the Children's Division can give you a specific quote. Our email address to inquiry about children's book edits is Children@RedLineEditingServices.com.

 

 

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